I think some sort of chart or other visuals would also help break up the text and make the article more visually appealing. I would say, either make a more extensive list of all the different rage faces or explain their use and culture in terms of the overall picture. It seemed like a bunch of examples of rage faces put into one article instead of an article explaining what they are. The layout of the article is unorganized and can be difficult to look up specific rage faces without using ctrl+F. That being said, there is also a lot of room for improvement.
I think this article has come a long way from when it first started out. Otherwise, well done! Quinlal ( talk) 03:00, 29 March 2014 (UTC) Reply Perhaps come up with a different caption or just remove the caption altogether, as the meme itself already says "Challenge Accepted". Also, I don't think the picture of the Challenge Accepted meme needs the caption underneath.
Many of the sections seem too short to stand on their own, so a bit more meat in some of the paragraphs would not go amiss. However, I think that the general layout is not that pleasing to the eyes. That shows some nice in depth research, going to sites you might not usually visit. I especially like that you included the bit about the origins of the Yao Ming face coming from reddit. This article provides many good examples of "Rage Comics", and with pretty good sources to back up where they came from. The usage section is very helpful to those looking at how to use a specific rage comic in the commonly understood way. I especially enjoyed the “usage” description of each one of them. I also think this article was successful in the number and range of examples given.
On the other hand, a lot of interesting hyperlinks were included which allowed a more full understanding of the topic. Memes were mentioned without fully distinguishing what they are. Another point of improvement would be to further explain the difference between a rage comic and a meme. I have a sense of what different rage comics may look like from past experience online however, someone with no previous knowledge might be confused. Although you can link through to them using the references posted, it would be more effective to have them directly on the page. This page for Rage Comics would be improved with the addition of a picture of the rage comic for each example given. This and an explanation to how users post to the sites mentioned in History may add some context as well for readers learning about a Rage Comic. I think a crucial aspect to Rage Comics and Memes is that they're generally user-generated content, which could have been included at the top of the article. A picture for each example may have rounded the article off ever further, but the explanations are detailed and sufficient. Giving different categories of Rage Comics, as well as popular examples of those categories helps readers fully understand the concept. This article can now successfully explain what a Rage Comic is in full due to the inclusion of examples. The one thing I think you guys could have done to enhance your article would be to add more pictures showing the reader what a Rage Comic actually looks like, as you guys only posted one picture. You explained the differences between Phrase Rage Comics and Picture Rage Comics and used examples for both of those types of Rage Comics.
The best part of this article was the descriptive examples you guys presented. You guys gave a detailed explanation defining the term Rage Comic that any user would be able to understand. I think this article did a successful job in explaining what a Rage Comic is. Eamjr ( talk) 19:30, 28 March 2014 (UTC)eamjr Reply However, the article seems to lack information in regards to topics such as the creation on Rage Comics and other general information in regards to Rage Comics. It seems like it can be hard to find information on pictures but you guys handled it rather well. Focusing on the more popular comics was also a good thing to do. You guys successfully were able to add examples of Rage Comics which made it easier to get a better understanding of that readers can expect to get out of the website.
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